tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2211448168223721077.post2314215741142731402..comments2023-12-08T05:31:17.982-05:00Comments on How To Like It: New PoemJohn W. Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05559990935099298745noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2211448168223721077.post-36377734127956976802008-10-29T17:44:00.000-04:002008-10-29T17:44:00.000-04:00This poem is lovely...This poem is lovely...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2211448168223721077.post-4364440540360630632008-04-24T20:32:00.000-04:002008-04-24T20:32:00.000-04:00Wow, you sure can write a poem. This poem conveys...Wow, you sure can write a poem. This poem conveys such complexities--or, should I say, takes me into them. I experience them.<BR/><BR/>Yes, "Love is an ambition to live like a saint / even if there is no sainthood inside you." <BR/><BR/>It's amazing what you do with the next lines, taking the "you" (and therefore also me) into the poem "Not here, but here . . ." <BR/><BR/>The "casual" arm says so so much about life, loss, mortality . . .Kate Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16478737570632377733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2211448168223721077.post-86031626843954016012008-04-24T08:19:00.000-04:002008-04-24T08:19:00.000-04:00Great job - love the happy dog :)Great job - love the happy dog :)Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05284802750845531904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2211448168223721077.post-76775095853714281752008-04-24T00:25:00.000-04:002008-04-24T00:25:00.000-04:00Wow, I like how this came out, particularly these ...Wow, I like how this came out, particularly these new lines: <BR/>"harvesting blossoms in the last winter grass.<BR/>A low cloud of mulch, fumes, and sun."Kelly Lucehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12704165342662341501noreply@blogger.com